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Bunny and Kitty Rave Queens

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Update: I'm done! I fixed all the little mistakes and I have to stop myself from messing with it.

I've been working on this non-stop for like 2 days straight, and I'm very proud of this drawing! It's going to be available to purchase!

:iconkaylink: <--- I want to thank her so much for her YouTube Photoshop tutorial for Beginners: [link]

I hope you guys like it! Let me know what you think! Be honest! Just keep in mind I'm still still learning.

:heart: Meow Meow

~ Marissa Lynn

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Well, it's decent but it has some problems that are very apparent.

First off the breasts of the left character. The breasts have too much space in between them and looking at the character as a whole makes it weird and awkward. Another problem is the lack of originality. This concept of the over exaggeration of a female's waist is done so often it's an understatement to call it a cliche. The details and shading are done well but the anatomy as well as proportions are thrown off and make the picture look highly unappealing. Like I stated before, the shading is done well and the details are amazing. The hair is nice, but mainly it's the anatomy here that throws off.

Overall, it's a decent picture. Though, attempt to not exaggerate the waist of a female waist to a degree like this because it's done too often and try going for making the breasts realistic.